Thor The Dark World my reedit notes

1. Get rid of narration (will require original score)
2. Make it a THOR movie. (cut the 1st Loki scene) go straight into Vanaheim battle.
3. Reduce CHUCK's screentime 8:20 (glaringly obvious recast is glaring)
4. Cut out mentions of Jane part 1 @ 10:14
5. Pointless pandering to weak knees, cut straight to party 10:45
6. Cut cringeworthy Jane date scene 12:35
7. Wow.... cut everything up to 16:18 Even the news report
8. Cut stupid interaction on phone 16:38 I'm cutting every time Jane becomes piney or acts stupid. I will make her a legit scientist I swear
9. Maaaaybe reedit the Thor Heimdall conversation 22:10 back and forth between Jane being sucked into the aether vault? "I can't see her"
10. Cut the mush "and then I was crying" CUT that line 25:24
"I believe fate brought us together" cut straight after that line to the Darcy interupt.

THIS is why I will be cutting out the opening narration (point 1) 30:45 It just gets reiterated later

11. Allright, they earnt that one 35:50
12. Cut reaction shots 43:17
13. Cut CHUCK again 51:40 possibly insert deleted scene here 52:09 cut people leaving out as if they were never there
14. Start scene with news report 54 mins in. Maybe edit Selvig's talk about the convergence 49:50 just before the news report.
15. Cut CHUCK again 57:38 59:05 no shit he will betray Thor, lets just get on with the Thor and Loki show
16. Cut CHUCK line 1:03:54 after chortle.

Thinking back I could possibly remove the kiss scene (point 11). The only vital info is about convergence and that's reiterated so many times.

17. If I cut the kiss then Cut "(the) only (woman) whose love you've prized" from 1:05:48 conversation.
18. This is a biggie. Cut phone call. Sound effect keys jangling. Jane looks down picks up keys. Finds portal. 1:18:55
19. Move scene 1:20:55 - 1:21:43 somewhere later, maybe just a scene or so later.

1:25:00 this made me go huh? and it still does "these devices were meant to detect anomalies not cause them" still makes no sense. Maybe cut it

20. Cut 1:26:27 darcy and intern get sucked into portal oopsie. No clumsy Jane.
21. Cut 1:28:37 Jane and Selvig running.
22. Make quicker, cut start of running 1:29:35
23. Edit sound so Jane says we're out of time while the shot is behind them looking at portal then cut her running.

24. Cut 1:35:55 - 1:36:04 no love lines/questions

Maybe cut the final Loki reveal or make it the after credits thing.